This entry courtesy of Victoria Boulton.
White Lies
A unicorn! She was
luminous with beauty in the silver light. My inner-child rose up from
the depths of my heart, dancing and laughing. I wished that I had
never silenced her and had dared to believe.
I came out from behind
the tree trunk and held out my hand as you would to a skittish pet.
“Hello.” My voice was soft with nerves and stupid with wonder.
The unicorn snorted and
pawed at the ground, and I thought she would flee, leaving me forever
wondering. But then my heart soared up on a wave of heat and
happiness as she approached. My fingers twitched as her breath
tickled my palm. So close, I thought. She lowered her horn.

“Don't!” I threw myself forwards, grabbing the arm he had drawn back to strike.
I staggered as he shook
me loose, but at this reprieve the unicorn trumpeted her victory and
lunged, burying her horn deep into my belly.
“Broaam!”
The troll grabbed the unicorn and flung her; she hit a tree with a
sickening crack! I
sank to my knees; the unicorn did not stir.
I
pressed shaking hands to my belly. “It's... so wet...”
“Girl.”
I looked up and he scooped me into his arms. “You were
foolish to approach a white fey,” he
rumbled as he carried me. “I will bring you to the
goblinfolk- they are clever with their hands and will know what to do
with you.”
I
struggled not to faint into the chest of my saviour, half-dead
because of the lies my mother read me when I was a child.
Artwork by Christian Damm, www.conceptartist.dk
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