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Otter becomes a Bard
All her life, Otter had wanted to be a bard.
She knew that being a fishmonger was a good trade, but she
wanted to be a Bard, she wanted to sing and tell stories to enchant others.
Sometimes she would hide in the reeds of the
riverbank and harmonise with the birds that lived alongside – they were not the
greatest of songsters, the ducks, herons, woodpeckers and jays but they sat of
an evening and made music for their own entertainment.
A bard, however, must
know history – so Otter sat under the trees and listened to them talking, she
dived into the river and let the water talk in her ears. Rather than just
swimming through the water, she let it tell her of its life, the
mountain snows where it had come from and the sea where it was going.
But the wise ones, the owls, clever creatures,
all hooted with laughter and told her that bards were not fishmongers.
One night, the animals gathered together for
the solstice, each to their own stone, in a circle, facing the centre where the
moonlight shone and the Spirit made herself known. Something moved the otter to
stand on her hind legs. She sang – sang the
song of her river, the trees who had stood for hundreds of years, the
stones under which she made her holt.
As she
sang, each creature joined in, until all life offered up one song – birds,
insects, mammals, the stones and trees, all of creation offered up one song of
Solstice to the Spirit and a ribbon of multicoloured hue rose from the earth to
the sky to tie them together. And in that moment the clouds covered the face of
the Moon apart from one beam that shone on the otter to make a circlet on her
head – the gold of a grateful Queen to her Bard.
Standing on her hind legs, her forepaws clasped
to her chest and her eyes closed, the otter swayed to the music and knew that she
WAS a bard.
Oh, this is amazingly wonderful! I love the idea of letting the water talk to her! Terrific entry!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love Otter :) Thanks for entering! x
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely... it's like the Just So stories meets the Chronicles of Narnia. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove the story. I like the idea of an otter who wants to be a bard and I think the final scene is lovely. (And the photo is really cute too!) :)
ReplyDeleteOh what a gorgeous tale! The magic of nature itself...True whimsy!
ReplyDeleteLovely tale, and it makes such a beautiful extended metaphor about the storytellers within us. Yay heartsong!
ReplyDeleteVery Awesome. :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful tale! Presently reading Wind in the Willows to my son and I felt an essence of that in the riverbank descriptions.
ReplyDeleteThank you all so very much - you're too kind. We are all bards in our own ways but sometimes we listen to the owls too much and don't believe enough. Sing your own song ... it is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOtter xxxx
Enchanting. Otters are such fun creatures and I love the idea of one wanting to sing.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Meg, very Narnia. So glad you decided to enter, Cameron!
ReplyDeleteAll the above, Narnia, Wind in the Willows, Tales of the Riverbank .. strong influences from when I was just a cub. I'm really honoured to be in such exalted company with these other great stories :-)
ReplyDeleteI too thought of Narnia when I read this, and I love the way the otter received her circlet from the Queen. Beautiful Cameron!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely enchanting! Nicely done. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely piece. One just doesn't read enough stories about bards -or otters for that matter. You've got a wonderful voice.
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