The Barefoot Girl
Sheer white dress, long red hair, pale
skin, bare feet.
Her laughter.
She was city legend, whispered among men
of a certain... persuasion.
“See her and your ass is grass,” an
associate said.
“After everything you've done you're
scared of a ghost?” he'd asked.
Rog feared no legend. The city was his territory.
He was out hunting when the Barefoot Girl
appeared to him by the fountain in Columbus Circle.
She smiled at him through the watery haze
and then laughed and disappeared into the crowd.
Her footprints remained on the sun-warmed
pavement just long enough for him to track her.
It was now after dark. It might even be the next day.
The Barefoot Girl had led him on a chase
all over the city.
They were somewhere in the Lower East
Side. Alphabet City, perhaps. He couldn't be sure.
She smiled at him from the mouth of an
alley.
“Almost time,” she said.
His hunter's eyes followed her bone-white
soles into the darkness of the alley.
He fingered the handle of his knife in but
did not draw it. He never did until it
was time to kill.
He put on his most lecherous grin and
walked into the alley.
Rog had spent much of his life in the dark
but the darkness in that alley was unlike any he'd experienced.
The city's noise faded and vanished.
Laughter.
Rog spun in the dark.
The lights of a passing car illuminated
the alley and in that one second he knew where he was.
That name stenciled on the dumpster. That broken fire escape.
A very hard, very cold, foot hit him in
the gut.
Laughter.
Another kick crushed his jaw.
More laughter. More blows.
The seventh shattered a knee. The eighth broke ribs.
Rog slumped to the pavement.
Laughter.
Two pale bare feet, cool against his face.
She reached down and forced him to look,
to see his victims- nine women- grinning at him from around the dumpster he
left them in.
Laughter.
Darkness. Then nothing.

Well worth the time you spent trimming. Dark and vengeful. Nice!
ReplyDeleteOooooo - that was a goodie! Very dark (like that) and very empowering (like that even more)
ReplyDeleteOh wow - evil meets it's match. Thanks for entering :)
ReplyDeleteOh my. Did he get his comeuppance or what?!
ReplyDelete*shudders*
Nice piece man! Very grim and filled with righteous vengeance.
ReplyDeleteWonderful dark story! It captured my attention from the get go!
ReplyDeleteSweet revenge and empowement. Loved the last few lines especially, as his body was crushed by HER! Dark and satisfying!
ReplyDeleteOoooh! Nice twist at the end! Reminded me of the "Mystery Date" episode of Mad Men a few weeks ago (but that's neither here nor there). Really cool!
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